Sunday, September 25, 2011

Week 5: Days One and Two: Stylin' and Profilin' with MLA

This week was a week of working with the big, bad MLA Style. On Tuesday, students worked in groups of 4 on a jigsaw activity in which everyone was an expert in an area of MLA: the layout expert, the in-text citation expert, and the works cited expert. The fourth member was the Performance Improvement Consultant whose job was to observe how one member of the group worked to find the answers to the four questions that were asked. 

All the answers to the questions were found at http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/01/

Each member of the group shared their answers with the other members and then submitted their document in the discussion forum.

Here is Sean C's PIC Comments on this group:

I viewed Conner as he worked extremely hard on finishing his task and understanding his section of questions. Conner seemed to type very fast and search thoroughly as he looked up the most reliable information. He took his time and finished about 10-12 minutes into the project. A few times he even said "nice" or "yeaaaaa" as he found the correct info he wanted. Shows a true student willing to work hard until they receive the info they want. This seemed to apply for all group members as well. This group I would rate an A++ for all of their hard work. Any difficulties you may ask? Nope not that I seemed to have noticed. Conner got all his questions answered and same with Carly and Anna Marie. Excellent job guys! 


EXTRA NOTES

All group members gave their best effort and communicated very well among themselves.
The only question that seemed to come up was whether we submit one or four different posts to the discussion board.
(with time we figured out we send four).

Here is a sample Layout Expert Submission from Mackenzie F.


MLA Format Activity
Mackenzie F. Group 3 Layout Expert

Answers to Guiding Questions for Layout Expert:
  • What are measurements for the margins in specific parts of the page?
            -The margins of the document should be 1 inch on all sides

  • What font and sizes are acceptable?
            -You should use a legible font like Times New Roman. Your fonts regular and italics            type styles should contrast enough that they are recognizable from one another. The font size should be 12 pt.

  • What information is found in the heading? How is that info ordered?
            -On your first page, create a header in the upper right-hand corner that includes your name, followed by a space with the page number. Your header should number all pages          consecutively in the upper right-hand corner, one-half inch from the top and flush with the right margin. Your instructor may ask that you omit the number on your first page. 

  • How should the paper be paginated?
            When you divide an essay into sections, you should number each section with an Arabic number and a period followed by a space and the section name. 

  • Do you underline your title?
            -Do NOT underline your title. 

On Thursday, the Palmetto Writers worked on Part II, creating a Works Cited page.  Before they did the Works Cited page, they each had to take a short quiz. Some of the pairs worked on the quiz together; some worked alone. Here were the directions to the task:
 
Directions: Work in pairs and read the directions below.

Name of Writer:

Name of Resource Person:

Directions:

1.      Click on the links below and do the exercises. Note the ones you got wrong on a piece of paper and note your final scores.



2.      Create a Works Cited page on the topic of cheetahs. You can use http://www.easybib.com/ or http://www.bibme.org/ or OWL Purdue Online Writing Lab at http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/01/ Format the Works Cited page correctly as the second page of this document and submit the document in the drop box in Angel. Save and label the document to include your name and the name of the assignment (e.g., Susie Smith MLA In-Class Activity).



a.       Youtube video: Fast and Furious: Lives of Cheetahs at http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WYSFS4cFnTk&feature=related

b.      Do a Search on Creative Commons and find an image of a cheetah and cite the image.

c.       Do research on a folktaleof how the cheetah got his spots and cite the website.

d.      Do research on a cheetah organization whose purpose is to research and implement strategies for cheetah conservation. Cite information from the Home page of the organization’s website.

e.       Do research on the cheetah and find a book from our library on cheetahs (http://library.fgcu.edu/

3.      Submit your work as an attachment in the Week 5 Thursday Discussion Forum and save and label your file with both names and the name of the assignment. Your subject heading of your post should also include both names and the name of the assignment. (e.g., Reid and Nicole A MLA Works Cited Page).


 Students reflected on what they learned from this activity putting in a sticky on Wallwisher. Check out what they said they learned. Use your cursor to move the stickies around.


I would like to showcase the blog posts that were exceptional this week. The first was on describing a person, place, or thing. The second blog post was to summarize and respond to an article in the New York Times on plagiarism.

Carly C's A Sky with Colors

The only way to experience the sky unfolding like a blossoming tulip is to set your wake up call for 6:00 in the morning. Sure that’s a little early for some, but if you want to feast your eyes upon an unreal site, you won’t hit the snooze button when your alarm clock jangles. Gold, violet, blue, and purple engulf the horizon and swallow it whole. The sun starts to creep up on you like a shark stalking an injured tuna, using its lateral lines to track its prey’s every move. Calmness swells the air and you feel as though you’re breathing in pure happiness. The waves play catch with the little birds that dare run the shoreline. Sandy toes beg for more like a five year old with puppy dog eyes in the middle of the game aisle in Toys-R-Us. You want to feel the comfort of home when you’re really just lounging outdoors? Watch the sunrise on a perfect morning from Fort Lauderdale beach and you will never want to leave. 
Mackenzie F's Stolen Words



Stolen Words


      The growing use of technology has made it easier for students to "copy and paste" work off the Internet into their papers. Our generation has grown up in a time where information on just about anything is just one click away. The only problem with this is that a lot of this information does not have a listed author. This allows people to believe that they do not have to cite the information and that it is there for anyone to use. The amount of people who believe taking information from the Internet is a serious crime is declining. They do not understand that using other peoples words is stealing and is a serious matter. This was all explained in the New York Times article, Plagiarism Lines Blur for Students in Digital Age
      I agree with the article in that plagiarism is a serious crime and that students do not take it seriously enough. It is unfair for someone to have worked on a piece of writing and put it on the Internet for other people to read and expand their knowledge on the subject just to have it stolen from them and not get any credit. I know what this feels like because in my marine class in high school, we worked in groups while doing lab assignments. I would always make sure that I did my share of the work because I hate when people just sit there and copy after not doing work the whole class period. There was this one kid that was always in my group and while the rest of us were finding answers, he was always texting on his phone. When class was almost over he would always rush to copy our answers. I hated when he did this because I would have much rather text the whole class time and not do any work, but I knew that was not fair to the rest of my group. People should be penalized for plagiarizing and should not be able to take credit for other people's work.


It was a great week. My observation is that the in-class activity takes longer than I expect. There was time at the end of the lesson to go over some quiz items and talk to the students about their final Paper 1 drafts which are due next Tuesday. The class is attentive and hard working. I am constantly amazed at the quality of the work that is coming out of them.

Grammar, word choice, and mechanics continues to be a problem. I am going to put peer editing groups together that are experts in different areas. I will put one grammar and mechanics expert in each group of four to serve as a mentor.

Ciao for now.


 








Friday, September 16, 2011

Week 4 Day Two: Doing Library Research at FGCU

We had a special visitor today from our Florida Gulf Coast University library, Kimberly Reycraft. Kimberly has a background in environmental science and policy and earned her Masters in Library and Information Science in 2008. She has been working at the FGCU Library since 2007.

 The session covered the following topics:
  • how to find books
  • how to find articles
  • how to get help (including help with MLA citation style)
She brought the Palmetto Writers through a series of exercises to help them find books and articles related to the topic of 20th century learning vs. 21st century learning. 

Paper 2 will focus on  a comparison and contrast of a person, a place, or a thing. The students will be required to use a minimum of three sources following the CARS checklist (credibility, accuracy, reliability, and support). 

Kimberly explained the following terms: peer-reviewed journal, abstract, microfilm, RefWorks, and more. It was an informative session. I realized that when doing comparison/contrast papers, it will be difficult to do one-stop shopping by typing in x vs. y key words.

Choosing those keywords to put in your search is vital to locating what you want quickly. There is so much out there, you have to hone in on those key words and narrow your search.


For our papers in Composition 1101, we won't be using peer-reviewed articles because our target audience will not be subject matter experts in the area of study. However, with that being said, when they enter their core major coursework, they may be asked to find peer-reviewed articles, so the exercise was great.


I think the students were surprised to learn that they can add articles of interest to folders, email or text the article link to themselves, and get an automatically formatted citation. Where were those tools in my day.

Libraries in my day looked like the photo below. We had to do our research in a library using a card catalog. Yes, cards were in those drawers according to subjects and you had to flip through the cards to locate what you needed to research.


                            from dfulmer's Photostream


A modern library looks something like this. This is our FGCU library. It's a cool and bright place to hang out. If you want to do your research from your dorm room or house, you can access it electronically.
                              From Florida Library Snapshot Day

The times have changed, no?

Wednesday, September 14, 2011

Week 4 Day One: Animoto Videos on Abstract Concept

My Palmetto Writers created a video on an abstract concept that they wrote about in their Paper 1 drafts using a cool Web 2.0 tool called Animoto.



Kylie and Lindsay's Animoto on Love

http://animoto.com/play/CQKlAhuOJDJ0X7DEYtCB6g

Bryan and Lisa's Animoto on Terrorism

http://animoto.com/play/Ve0D7mMmqAcxPra11CeNPA 

Malorie and Anna Marie's Animoto on Despair

http://animoto.com/play/dXMaQNZC4wIReL09LuD1Jw


Carly C and Reid's Animoto on Relaxation

animoto.com/play/b26OVnzHPDp2KsJRbKz2KQ 


Michaela and Zach's Animoto on Humor


animoto.com/play/w00wli333LvcXYYC0rseUA

Brittany's Animoto on Happiness

animoto.com/play/02USuEIFFXQ0LK9dyrIr0g


Nicole R and Vinnie's Animoto on Future


animoto.com/play/H8Y3nhLHQi7tQPhsIucEJw

Carly and Ursula's Animoto on Pain

http://animoto.com/play/z00x1byRtSiBkP1vT26NMw#

The students needed much more time playing with Animoto. Perhaps having them go through the tutorial before coming to class and having them upload pictures beforehand and choosing their music for their concept would have been more efficient.

Except for a few people who had to figure out the text function, everyone was pretty comfortable with doing this activity. The students who didn't submit probably couldn't figure out how to share the link. As usual, more time is needed for these activities.


Going over the results of Quiz 2, it is obvious that grammar and mechanics is a problem (e.g., comma splices and commas after introductory clauses).


I also need to keep reviewing how to identify the thesis, or claim, in an essay. They were better with the identification of the thesis in Jo Goodwin's "What is Poverty?" See the Polleverywhere results below. The correct answer was the last one, and only 50% of the class identified it as the correct one.








Saturday, September 10, 2011

Week 3 Day 2: Observing and Writing with Evernote

                                              Taken from Johan Larssen

The Palmetto Writers ventured beyond the classroom today to do their writing. After a brief introduction to Evernote, a free download that allows one to use his or her smart phone to take notes, record observations, take a photo of a subject, and share the link with others.

Check out this tutorial.



Let me showcase what my students did when they went outside and free wrote for a few minutes and then structured their thoughts to write a descriptive paragraph incorporating at least three of the senses, using a simile or a metaphor, and using strong verbs.

Ursula's Flowers


Vinnie's Grass

Kylie's Clouds 

Not all students could figure out how to share the link or get their photo to show with the text. When I do this lesson again, I will have watch a more detailed tutorial on using Evernote. Perhaps I will assign the tutorial for homework.

The timing was right on this activity. It seemed like 40 minutes is enough to do the free write and then the structured descriptive paragraph.

When a solution didn't work for others, they were able to troubleshoot and find other ways to get that assignment done. I was particularly impressed by Anna Marie's persistence in finding a way to share her link. She ended up sharing her whole Evernote notebook, but it worked! 

Tuesday, September 6, 2011

Week 3 Day 1: Showing vs. Telling Day


Do you remember when you were in kindergarten and there was Show and Tell Day? Well, the Palmetto Writers worked on the difference between showing and telling in descriptive writing.

They came to class having read these two articles on showing vs. telling in writing and then were set to task to read two articles on how to show rather than tell in writing.

Check out these links to articles and test your knowledge of the difference between showing and telling.  Show vs. Tell Article 1 

Show vs. Tell Article 2 

Now it is my turn to brag about the Palmetto Writers who turned the following sentences from telling to showing. This is one group's sentences.

This contribution is from Bryan, Conner C, Jake, and Reid

1a. TELL: Jack had an argument with his wife.
1b. SHOW: Jack’s voice was becoming louder than the radio in the other room. As he screamed words never heard by his wife, Jack became something of a monster. His face was red hot and the vein in his neck was protruding out farther than it has ever before.

2a. TELL: Jack fell off a scaffold and seriously injured himself.
2b. SHOW: Jack lost his balance on a rickety scaffold and began to flap his arms violently as he tried to regain his center of balance. Failing to do so, he yelped and plummeted to the ground. The people around him gasped as they gaped at the six-foot man ungracefully flailing from his perch. As he crashed to the ground, the gathering crowd heard a loud crack as if Barry Bonds had just hit a home run.


3a. TELL: Jack was worried about the upcoming biology test.
3b. SHOW: Palms sweaty and head throbbing, Jack tried to cram 250 pages of incomprehensible text into his brain for his upcoming biology test. Tick-tock goes the clock. 3 a.m. in the morning and not even his Red Bull will keep him from reading the inside of his eyelids.



The lesson went well. To improve upon it, I would have an Observer Worksheet for my PICs to fill out to give them guidance on providing feedback to the group. I noticed that many of my PICs wanted to participate in the discussion. They were told only to observe and take notes.
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Week 2 Day Two Sep 1st: What is Your Pet Peeve

It was Pet Peeve Day for the Palmetto Writers. What a wonderful way to do a description assignment.


Groups brainstormed a list of pet peeves. We shared them....lots of them. Then, the writers picked one pet peeve on the list and free wrote for 5 minutes. After that, they structured their free writing piece and submitted to the discussion forum.

Here is a sample of the writing. Kudos to Sean Corneby for his draft.

                             (taken from Devin Laney's Photostream
                                    at http://www.flickr.com/photos/devenlaney/)

Sean Corneby's Children on Leashes Draft

Have you ever walked into a mall hoping to have a tremendous day of shopping? Well I know I have. In fact let it also be said that I have had my "tremendous day" turned upside down by witnessing a shocking and unconventional way of parenting. If you ever walk into an outlet, mall, or heck even down the street, you may find one of the most unusual things:  parents (mothers most of the time) have their children attached to a leash in front of them. 

Whether the leash is monkey-themed, or teddy bear-themed, it is a leash nontheless. Are you out of your deranged mind putting a child, a baby human being, not an animal and not an alien on a leash? If you cannot control your child, I'd suggest counseling or seeking parental advice please and thank you. 

Children should never be put on  leashes whether they enjoy how it lunges them backwards if they run out too far. It is not humane and should be frowned upon as I frown upon it everytime I see this. I have actually stared at a mother once or twice before shaking my head and using my lips as I whisper, “What the hell” as I continue walking. I do this hoping that she will read my lips and realize, “Wait what am I actually doing to my child?! 

Maybe if I showed them a picture of a canine dog vs. an adorable baby they will get the picture and understand they have a child and not a pet. Leashes are not for children and if the parents have one, I suggest they find the nearest trash bin to throw it away. 


If you want to submit your pet peeve (or complaint) piece, the New York Times has a complaint box. Go to 

http://cityroom.blogs.nytimes.com/category/complaint-box/ 

Here are the instructions for submitting your own work. Beware of serious competition from my Palmetto Writers who are going to rework their piece and submit it to the N.Y. Times Complaint Box. 

If you wish to submit a Complaint Box essay, please send it as an attachment and in the body of the e-mail to complaintbox@nytimes.com, along with your name, address, phone number and e-mail. In the subject line of the e-mail, type your last name, followed by “Complaint Box” and the subject of your complaint. Essays can be 100 to 500 words. Because we receive so many submissions, we can get back only to those whose complaints are being considered for publication. If you do not hear from us, thank you anyway, and feel free to submit it elsewhere.